Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

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Re: Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

Postby Dia406 on Sun May 11, 2008 12:50 pm

How do you tell nintendo about this? I might not be able to write the next chapter today because I'm busy but I'll try(I might have extra time to write the chapter).
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Re: Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

Postby LordKaien on Mon May 12, 2008 7:36 am

idk, go 2 nintendo.com, and find a way 2 email them.
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Re: Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

Postby Dia406 on Thu May 15, 2008 9:45 pm

Chapter 5 Lost?!?!?!?!?:
The trio was walking along a riverbank.
" Great this is terrible, never expected this to happen. Grrrrrr SILVER GET US OUT OF HERE!" Kenny and his atitude.
" How should I know where to go I'm not a navigator smart one(sarcastic)" Silver said back.
" Oh yeah I'll show you smart one" Kenny was in combat mode ready to fight.
" Guys don't fight now we got to find out how to get out of this place." Good one Hikari you seem like the only one whose mature(Silver is mature hes just quick tempered).
" Ok fine." Kenny agreed.
The trio scanned the area.
Silver had one of his flashbacks again.
The flashback shows Silver walking in a forest in the same shape as this one but looked different.
"Hey guys I know where we are this is Eterna Forest."
"NO WAY!"
"It looks a lot different."
"Lets talk about it later now we got to get out."
The trio got lost trying to remember the way.
"SILVER! This is your falt where lost!" Cool it Kenny.
"Your blaming me because of memory."
"Why you little jerk you drag us out of here or or(Kenny thinks) I'll tell Hikari what really happened two years ago."
The truth is that Hikari was going berserk during the fight Dialga vs Palkia and made those two claw at Silver and Kenny leaving permanent marks on there legs.
"Oh Hikari!"
Silver pushed Kenny out on a cliff where they both fell Hikari following them.
They landed.
"Ow my head." Silver said in pain.
"Guys get up I know where this is."
It was the Old Chateau and from there on they made it to Eterna.
They checked into a hotel there.
Hikari was waiting to have a little talk with Silver and Kenny........

Chapter 6 coming soon titled:
A Chat Among Friends
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Re: Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

Postby diywid on Mon May 19, 2008 1:02 pm

:geek: I could mark your punctuation, but I won't.
Can't wait for the next installment! ;)
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Re: Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

Postby Dia406 on Thu May 29, 2008 5:52 pm

Heres chapters 6-7, I deside to have a double chapter sense I had writers block.
Silver and Kenny entered the room.
"Guys back in the forest what did Kenny mean."
Silver unrolled his pant leg.
"Oh my gosh I did that to you guys!"
"Yep we can't feel it anymore though but it bugs me."
"Oh well why didn't you tell me."
"I didn't want to make you feel bad."
"And Silver made me forget it for a couple of years because he made Roo give me brain damage."
"So what are you guys planing to do?"
"Oh I'm taking on the gyms for the rush 360 symbols."
"Me to."
"Well I'm gonna take on the contests in Hoen and here."
"I was planing on going to Hoen this moring."
"Oh really."
That moring:
"See ya guys!"
"BYE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
After Hikari left the two boys went over to the gym..............

Chapter 7:
"Ready!"
"You bet!"
The two boys went in to the gym. The Eterna Gym was a total remake of the Eterna Forest.
"And they did this just for Rush 360."
Silver took out his board.
"I'm going first."
"Okay I'll watch your match."
"Hey Silver entering Rush 360 I knew you would."
"Yeah! Ready to race."
"Yeah!"
Silver and Gardenia swent to the starting line.
"Go Roo and Rai!"
The pokemon popped out of there pokeballs.
Gardenia was using her Roserade and a newly caught Leafeon.
"On your mark get set go!"
They zoomed out of the starting line! Gardenia was in the lead.
"Silver these trees don't seem right." Rai said in telekinessess.
"Your right they seem...Watch out!"
The tree branch tried to hit Silver. They can move!
Robots started popping up.
Roo and Rai used Aura Sphere and Energy ball.
KABOOM!
The robots exploded. Silver used hs gear Speed Break!
He was neck to neck with Gardenia.
"Time Break!"
Everything slowed down except for Silver.
The finish line was right there Silver crossed he won!

Silver got his symbol and it was Kenny's turn.
Kenny won quick!

Chapter 8 coming soon.
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Re: Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

Postby LordKaien on Fri May 30, 2008 6:37 am

a little rushed, but good.
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Re: Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

Postby diywid on Sun Jun 01, 2008 5:07 am

Well done- glad to see you're keeping going with it. :D :ugeek:
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Re: Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

Postby Dia406 on Wed Jun 11, 2008 11:03 pm

OMG I finnaly figured out a way to continue this how come I didn't think of a way. This chapter well be marked as chapter 9 but I got a feeling it might be long:

Silver and Kenny were riding there boards around trying to practice some moves or tricks they could use on Team Galactic when they appear again.
"Hey Kenny do you feel that." Silver said while shivvering.
"Yeah good point its colder then normal."
They stopped by the nearest pokemon center. Silver went on the PC for a little.
"Wow if its gonna be this cold I better get Gold." Silver said while checking his storage.
Silver took out a Cyndaquil and put it in his party.
"Yeah good point how did this happen?"
"Good question young man." Said a mysterious guy sitting on the chair across from kenny.
"Well if I remembered correctly the battle that happened on Mount Coronet seemed to cause a climate change by the way I've always wondered what happened up there."
Silver and Kenny in mind: Uhh long story.
"Anyway it seemed to cause some climate change now its all cold I'm the one investigating about this, oh and before I go I suggest you guys get a full pokemon party and warmer clothes espiacially you kid with the brown hair thats spiked up." He was talking about SIlver.
"Oh well see ya some other time maybe."
"He had a point there lets get warmer clothes."
"and a full team."
Silver and Kenny asked there moms to send them some warmer clothes.
"I was about to call you and ask about that it seems oddly cold."
Silver now was wearing:
His blue berret(Its the hat DP male character wears.)
A Blue Jacket with a red shirt under it
and his regular blue jeans
Kenny was wearing:
An orange sweater with a white scarf.
His head was covered up with a ski cap.
They were both wearing goggles in there eyes so the snow won't get in there eyes.
"Now its time for our teams."
Silver brought out:
Gold his Cyndaquil
Obviously Roo and Rai
Skyress his Starapter
Icey his Glaceon
Sparky the Pichu
Kenny brought out:
Chimchar
Pachirisu
Rampardos
Leafeon
Pidgeyeot
Magyb(Sorry forgot how to spell so I put in B because its kind of obvious what its talking about._
"Now were ready."
"Yeah!"
Silver and Kenny went out and were on there way to Hearthome. The road was hard to cross because of all the snow. But in the end they finnaly made it. Silver was knocked out in the snow so Kenny had to carrie him. They made it to the pokemon center. Kenny took off his goggles and sweater.
"Thank goodness were alive."
Silver woke up shortly after that and took off his jacket and goggles.
"This place is even more dangerous then we thought."
"Hey boys you heard what happened to sinnoh take a look at the latest map."
Silver and Kenny looked at the map.
"WAAAAAA!"
"Poor Snowpoint."
They scanned the other areas........


Chapter 10 coming soon titled:
The new sinnoh.
Soory if I misspelled anything I probaliy did because its late in Colorado right now andI'm tired.
Anyway feel free to ask where I got the climate change idea from I don't mind answering.
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Re: Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

Postby diywid on Thu Jun 12, 2008 10:13 am

Actually your spellings were quite good. Magyb is spelt Magby by the way. Good story, you're clearly not just giving up on this just because you've got another story going.
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Re: Pokemon Rush 360..........G-PG

Postby Dia406 on Tue Jun 17, 2008 12:39 pm

Chapter something didn't keep track:
"The whole sinnoh area is.............Gulp."
The sinnoh area was covered in very deep snow, Snowpoint was no longer a city and they had to move into the temple there. Sunyshore was more like Snowshore. Floroma's flowers were dying out. Even Stark Mountain changed. Silver wondered "I wonder where heatran was."
"Here in hearthome were not that deep into the snow because of all the large buildings here."
"Kenny I'll be right back."
Silver put on his jacket and headed outside.
"Go Skyress!"
A Starapter popped out of the pokeball. "Lets go to Twinleaf."
Silver and Skyress flew over to Twinleaf and were very surprised of what happened there.
"All this snow has tookin out the whole area, wheres my house wheres Kenny's house!?"
"I hope Prof.Rowan is ok."
Unstead of flying to Sandgem Silver desided to walk so he doesn't tire out Skyress. The pokemon center was still standing and luckily the lab was to.
"Rowan you in here."
Silver opened the door to the lab.
"Prof.Rowan you there?"
Silver walked across the room to look for Prof.Rowan. But he was nowhere in sight. There was a letter on the table.
"I'll take this it says to Silver and Kenny."
Silver went back outside and told Skyress to take him to the survival area. The area was damaged by the snow more then Silver thought.
"I wonder if Buck is ok."
Silver checked the fight area and looked for the battle tower. Luckly its to tall to go down. When Silver entered he saw everybody who lived in the area was here.
"Hey Buck what happened your house?"
"Long Story to bad for me I only have shorts and a T-shirt."
"Oh its allright here take my scarf and jacket."
Now silver was wearing his red sweater.
"You sure?"
"Yeah I still have my red scarf in my backpack."
"Oh thank you Silver."
"By the way Buck do you know what happened to Heatran."
"Oh yeah I captured it before the climate change happened."
"Ok just wondering."
Silver headed back to Hearthome and told Kenny about the news."
"So Twinleaf is dead so is Snowpoint."
"Yep."
"How can you be so calm about it!!!!!!!!!" Good old Kenny.
"Buck told me everybody in the area was at the battle tower."
"Oh no wonder you were so calm."
Silver and Kenny checked there next destination Solaceon.
"Oh and Kenny I found this at the Proffessar's lab."
"Oh really what is it."
Silver and Kenny opened the letter that Silver found.........

Next Chapter:
The Cold Climate and Prof.Rowan
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